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Post by Marrowbone on Sept 6, 2010 20:05:38 GMT -5
I'll try to outline the plot that Breeze came up with the best I can, then we'll get your opinions on it. THE POWER IS YOOUUURRSS!*
Unhappy with their Clans and Clan-mates, a few apprentices take their lives in their own paws. Formulating a plan, they recruit many of the apprentices from all four Clans and disappear to uninhabited territory to form their own, fifth Clan. With the surprise loss of their young cats, the Clans begin blaming and warring against each other. Now the fight's on to keep the Clans at peace and to find and retrieve their apprentices. But the apprentices have continued to learn without mentors. Will they even want to come back? Or will they be more of a match for their old Clans, with new allies and new tricks?
'Kay now, what does ev'rybody think?
*If you get the reference, you get an eco-cookie. [/blockquote]
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Post by *~ForestWind~* on Sept 7, 2010 11:12:10 GMT -5
Ooh now this is different. Forest likes.... xD
I like the whole apprentice's leaving thing, so we should definitely do that. But I also think we should continue thinking of what is going to happen because of this since we don't want what happened with the sickness.... like cats just getting sick and it going on forever. Instead of clan cats just getting mad and just trying to continuously get their apprentices back, maybe something else happeneds because of it? Like maybe all the clans have to team up to try to convince them to come back? Or maybe Starclan gets mad because another clan was made? The clans let the apprentices make there own clan hoping they will need help... and then something eventually does happen?
=shrug= Either way this will be interesting Hopefully it will get the site back on its feet.
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