Foxbreeze

[daybreak]

Foxbreeze crouched in the center of MapleClans camp and thought I cant believe I'm a warrior! even thought she had been one for a whole moon now. Cats purred and meowed and she could hear faint mewling coming from the nursery every now and then. Everything was how it should be.


ooc:// feel free to jump in! I cant think of anything to do.

[» Sacrifice]

[No, no. =3 You must role-play your cat entering the clan; unless they are clan born, they come from rogues, and must be role-played into the clan asking to join as rogues before they become clan cats.]

[Marrowbone]

((Breaking news! We've been revamping the site over the past few days, and we've just decided to get rid of the 'Roleplay into camp' rule. Your post is fine! Just so long as you don't have any pre-existing relationships with other cats, which would be confusing for other players, like if Foxbreeze was suddenly BFFs with my Blizzardbird without my knowledge. Okay? X3
By the way, I'm all about improvement, and we hope everyone constantly finds ways to improve their skills! A little piece of advice from me to you is to always spell-check your in character posts to nick any accidental spelling errors. You couldn't imagine the errors I always find in mine!))

[Jayheart]

Jaykit opened her bright blue eyes that seemed too large for her head. She opened her small pink mouth, her tiny teeth showing for just a moment. Then she rose quietly to her paws and carefully stepped over her adoptive family, not wanting to wake them. She made it to the entrance without disturbing anyone, and smiled in silent victory. She padded past the fresh-kill pile and wrinkled her nose at the smell of it. Se wasn't old enough for the smell to make her hungry, so she continued to the center of camp.

She spotted a bug, and dropped playfully into a hunting crouch. Her big ears flicked forward, and she quietly stalked forward, her paws making no sound. Then the butterfly lifted into the air, and Jaykit leaped into the air with amazing strength for her age. She caught it in her paws, and pinned in to the ground with her tiny claws. But she saw it struggling under her paws, and feeling merciful, lifted her paws and released it. "Buh-bye, butterfly!" she called after it, jumping in the air and waving her paws franticly.

Jaykit smelled Foxbreeze, a new warrior, and turned her head. She crouched down again and started to follow the older cat, planning a sneak attack on her tail. She smiled to herself and wrinkled her nose, fending off a sneeze that would give her away.

[daybreak]

" I know your there Jaykit, I can smell you." Foxbreeze said without looking back at Jaykit. Foxbreeze turned around and smiled at the curious kit, her tail swishing back and forth. "If you want to attack someone, be sure to stay down wind." Foxbreeze told her. She noticed Owlstep sitting alone eating a skinny bird and padded over to join him.

[» Sacrifice]

[Please remember the 5 sentence minimum. Danke.]

[Jayheart]

((Of course, Sacri, point out the sentences, but not the POWERPLAYING!

You can't play other people's characters, thats called power-playing. You can't put in your post that MY character said "Thanks". You don't know what I might do next. For instance, she could be bipolar and could be extremely offended that you told her what to do. Keep that in mind. So if you could just edit your post, that't be great.))

[» Sacrifice]

[She edited the post after I replied. xD That is why I didn't catch it. ]

[Jayheart]

((Haha, well still. I think Marrow would be proud of me for catching that haha.))

[Marrowbone]

(( As Sacri said it was editted after we saw it, we definately would have said something if it was there, Jay.))

[*Sinister*Dreams*]

((*Nimblestar stares awkwardly at Marrow, Sacri, and Jay before slowly raising an eyebrow and wondering if, had he had access to a computer, he should delete the random posts evaluating the mistakes of others but decides against it due to the fact he'd rather be out doing the tasks of a leader like hunting and ordering cats around instead.

Longest run on ever. Basically, can we delete these informational posts so that they can get to rp? So happy to see some activity!))