HEY, HEY! I need onions!

[Marrowbone]

LOOKIE HERE, I've actually bothered to work on something! 'Kay, I've begun figuring out the format for the comic. BUT I'm not sure about the size. Take a lookie here, and tell me if you think this is a good page size.
Note that everything here are just place-holders; Not final. For instance, I can change the colors of the lens flare and the brightness of the letters. And that white line won't be there later. I'm open for suggestions!

[» Sacrifice]

I like the lens flare a lot. However, the second thing, I can't read what it's suppose to say at all.

The page length looks good to me though, but it depends upon how much comic you want to have on the page. My only thought is that if your going for more pages would be to shrink it down a notch or so. Other then that though, I like it.

[Marrowbone]

Yes, I HAVE COMMITTED THE SIN THAT IS LENS FLARE AND I LIKE IT!
The second word is 'Testing', which is only there so I know what effects I used on the title are X) I can take it off and edit the letters anytime. Credits, page number and page title (If there is one) Will likely go in that spot.

Oh, I can change the color of the lens flare to things like blue, red, and green, so I was thinking of changing that through the pages. Maybe I could change it depending on who's being focused on that page? Or page-by-page? I haven't decided yet.

The reason I made it so big to start was because, at full view, there's not much comic space =p I want to keep the inches consistant, so I don't think I can shrink it any more without making the panels real small (I draw big, so I'm trying to avoid this). But I may be able to figure out a solution before I start. Thanks for the feedback! X]

Nnergh, though, on the first page. I have it storyboarded roughly the way I like it, but there's a LOT of cats in it! DX And they'll all real small! So I might have to do those cats using Paint, since my pencil can't handle that.