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Post by ~XxLone*WolfxX~ on Jan 15, 2008 17:38:34 GMT -5
chapter 1:The magic twoleg thingy Once upon a time in a place not so far away a kit played just outside camp with its mother and sister. Then a warrior bounded by with a folded leaf like thing in its mouth."OOOOOOHHHHH whatsa that Butcherclaw?" The little she-kit asked amazed."This little Pattykit is a freshkill carrier." He said in a superior tone. The little tom kit bounded over to the warrior,"Cool where'dya get it?"Butcherclaw smiled,"Its a secret." The kits exchanged awed glances."We can keeps a secrat." Pattykit said in a quet squeky voice."Yeah Smearpaw told me's a secrats about accidently spillen mouse bile on the fresh kill pile just a little while ago." the dark grey and white kit said in a whisper."Jaykit You just told hims a secrat so a nows its not a secrat any mores." Butcherclaw looked at the kits with a horrified look on his face. He into camp yelling for no one to eat the fresh kill. The two kits just shruged. Pattykit's dark grey and brown was ruffled as a warm breeze blew."Ya wanta ask mama if itsa time for our appentuce sermony." She jumped over to her mother, Locussky."Mama is it time for our..." Her mother cut her off by grabbing her and ruffly licking her."humph plumph ugg. notdamotherbasth." Pattykit squeked."You ceramony is about to start now come on." They walked into camp and everyone was spitting and hacking except for Smearpaw, Butcherclaw, and Cobrastar. ((More of C1 later))
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Post by ~XxLone*WolfxX~ on Jan 17, 2008 10:51:43 GMT -5
"Now go say you sorry to every cat that ate the kill. Clean the prey but leave one peice for yourself to taste then after the ceramony take your mentor Rainbowstorm and hunt for freshkill so we can eat something thats not wet." The apprentice went away to do his task's. Pattykit and Jaykit stumbled over nervously."Um we are ready." Pattykit mumbled."Good, good."Cobrastar jumped on high stump. He called the familair calling although mostly everyone was already there."Now we gather to accept two kits as apprentices. Pattykit from this day on until you receive your..." He was cut of by Puresnow."Wait a sec Cobrastar. I am getting quit old I need an apprentice to train before I pass. If Pattykit will accept it then I want her." the old tom spoke calmly about his death."Very well Pattypaw?" Cobrastar turned to the little kit/apprentice."Um..." she stuttered. Her a Medicine cat! Imppossible. But it was such a great honor. She thought for a while and when she had her answer she realized that alll eyes where on her."Yes I will be the medicine cat apprentice and medicine cat after you Puresnow." She spoke carefully but surely."Good."Puresnow smiled and walked over to her. He spoke the words under the starlite sky. The two cats touched noses then they looked at Jaykit."Pattypaw!Pattypaw!" everyone called out her new name. Then they all queited down."Jaykit from now on you will be known as Jaypaw and Duskecho will mentor let him pass on his hunting skills and strong will." Duskecho walked over and touched noses with Jaypaw."Jaypaw!Jaypaw!" everyone called."Now Smearpaw come here." Smearpaw walked to the stump his tail dragging in the dirt."Now you did a foolish thing this day but. That does not mean we can keep you from your next step toward warriorship. You will go with me and Rainbowstorm to highstone tomarrow." The apprentice looked at the leader with suprise in his eyes."Now tonight is the gathering. Jaypaw, Pattypaw, Levelstone, Duskecho, Butcherclaw, Locussky, and elders if you want to go join us now." Everyone gathered by the entrance to leave.
Shadowclan Leader:Cobrastar-shiny brownish black tom with yellow eyes Deputy:Everdance-white and brown she-cat with creamy brown eyes Medicine Cat:Puresnow-white tom with blue eyes(blind) (app.Pattypaw) Warriors: Soaringheart-light grey she-cat with sky blue eyes Levelstone-dark grey tom with silver eyes Butcherclaw-shiny brownish black tom with dark green eyes Rainbowstorm-calico she-cat with light green and blue eyes (app.Smearpaw) Duskecho-light brown tom with redish brown eyes (app.Jaypaw) Nightshard-Black tom with white streaks and pale green eyes Locussky-dark grey and white with yellow eyes Queens: Reaffire-redish brown she-cat with greyish tail and yellow eyes(Muskkit, Gailkit, Leerkit, Strifekit) Elders: Patchfur-dirt brown tom with thin fur and yellow eyes Dimsmudge-black she-cat with a brown smudge on shoulder and green eyes
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