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Post by B-r-e-z-e--->> on May 9, 2009 13:02:34 GMT -5
This is a cute poem I wrote awhile ago about messy rooms xP The Pink Elephant
No place to walk The isle's filled You can jump and hop Or spring out from the window sill The clothes piled to the ceiling The cans crowded every wall In the corners there was no need for shadows And the garbage spread in to the hall Scattered and torn books Clothing that no longer fit School supplies and music sheets Coke and potato chips I sat upon my bed Watching shows on TV Forgetting the pink elephant stuffed under my bed That I would need to soon feed. My father came in His face a stern mask And I soon realized The question he would ask. First he raged about the mess Next he scolded about books unread Then he whined about ruined clothes Then finally, prodded the pink elephant stuffed beneath the bed. I told him I was sick I explained there had been an epic war I pretended to be frozen in ice I complained about evil mice in my drawers. He told me I was selfish He told me I was vain He told me to pick up my room Oh, he told me with such disdain I obeyed his orders The task took many days Every minute felt like hours And I knew this was my pay Eventually the shoes moved to the closet And the Clothes were on hangers or folded in drawers But when I went to retrieve my pink elephant I found that it was no more.
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Post by *~ForestWind~* on May 9, 2009 13:22:47 GMT -5
Hahaha, I love it Breeze. ;D I cant write poems for my life... I try though.
Maybe I should attempt to clean my room today... But I dont want my pink elephant to leave! ^^
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Post by B-r-e-z-e--->> on May 9, 2009 14:32:33 GMT -5
But a Pink Elephant is something that no one wants to talk about. It's a figure of speech. Ex. "A pink elephant sat between us like a reclusive spider."
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Post by *~ForestWind~* on May 9, 2009 20:17:14 GMT -5
=Rubs sleepies out of eyes= Wow, that makes alot more sense now. I cant believe I actually didn't get that at first, I am usually very good at spotting the similes metaphors, and all that other junk. ;D Wow..
But I still like my elephant... xDD
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